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The
course learning goals that I have made the most progress in are supporting my
thesis, and effective consideration of my role as a writer.
I
had some difficulty supporting my thesis. At first, I wasn’t fully developing
my ideas that support it. In my blog post 4, EH
101 Spring2012: Writing---Anywhere?,
I didn’t give enough details, For example, I didn’t write fully explain
the different types of applications I use to write anywhere. I left my readers wanting to know more. I
took heed to the feedback and corrected it in Blog Post 5, EH
101 Spring2012: How The Enviroment Effect My Writing, by elaborating on
every subject and/or idea I included in my writing. In my DS 106 assignment, EH
101 Spring2012: Deserted Island, I
explained my reason for picking the
assignment, what the assignment is about, and why I will need each item I
chose.
At
one point, I wasn’t effectively taking consideration of my role as the writer.
I was not making sure my writing flowed well together. In Blog Post 5, EH
101 Spring2012: How The Enviroment Effect My Writing, I should have used transitional words when I
elaborated from one subject to another , so my post wouldn’t seem jumpy. I
corrected this problem in Blog Post 6, EH
101 Spring2012: My Problem With Research Papers, by using transitional word
to go from one point to another. Also, I continued to improve on supporting my
thesis by elaborating on each idea.
I
will continue to progress my writing. I will work on including a concluding paragraph
in all my writings. I know with the improvements I have made so far and the
improvements I will make in the future, I will definitely become the great
writer I want to be.
